You are gone a bit far

In the world’s worldly mess,
Just calm down without any stress.
Try to be who you are,
As your mentality has gone a bit far.

Find a new way that no one has before found,
Then and only then you would be crowned.

Crack your thinking,make your day,
The world will then make your way.

Explore the world, Explore yourself,
Then,At last you would discover yourself.

When you would discover who you are,
Then you would realise that you are gone a bit far.

                Divesh S Jairamdasani 

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  1. Brilliant words of truth, Divesh. Loved the awesome picture too.

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    1. divesh9022 says:

      Thank you for your comments

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  2. Great poem. Beautiful photos. Did you take these yourself?

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    1. divesh9022 says:

      I haven’t took these photos but poem is written by me

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      1. The poem is beautiful. Lots of depth.

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      2. divesh9022 says:

        Thank you ☺☺☺

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      3. You are welcome.

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  3. Beautiful Divesh. It’s the most philosophical poem you’ve ever composed. Keep goin’!

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  4. cseveneaj says:

    Well penned. Beautiful❤

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      1. cseveneaj says:

        You’re welcome!😉😁

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  5. Honey8 says:

    They are beautiful words! 🙂

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      1. Honey8 says:

        Welcomed a ton!

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  6. Taruna says:

    True words… stunning swan picture… definitely the calm amidst the irruption of drama!

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    1. divesh9022 says:

      Iam glad you loved it!

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      1. Taruna says:

        And now I did all over again..

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    1. divesh9022 says:

      Thanks a lot… 😊😊

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  7. Thanks for the follow 🙂

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